Very good Nadith it was very funny and your idea for it was good. Your charcters are kind of talking fast so maybe if you added some more pauses it would have a better flow but other than that it was good.
this is hilarious.i like the idea.nice job.
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Very good Nadith it was very funny and your idea for it was good. Your charcters are kind of talking fast so maybe if you added some more pauses it would have a better flow but other than that it was good.
this is hilarious.i like the idea.nice job.
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